>>6067

i want this picture to move so bad

Were you going for a white or asian shinji...because i think most people draw him white

well, i used the cover of volume 2 or 3 of the manga for reference

He looks white. The mouth is wonky, the hair looks boring, like he washed it with some cheap ass schampoo without using conditioner, and from the sight of it, I believe he slept with his headgear on. The left piece has sort of, wandered from the side of his head, unto his forehead.
I suppose also his neck is very long.

Nice try thought.

>>5218 dude, this is shinji were talking about

I like the detail in this except the shading looks a little off. I think the nose looks like it should be a little lighter.

>>5259
i think the nose looks fine
he almost looks like a really pimply red nosed teenager

Shinja = Japanese

>>6036
they arent free from that fate either
ive seen plenty of pimply faced japanese boys at my school during its 1 week exchange thing

Try to give his eyes more expression, I'm not too sure what they're trying to convey here.

I hope you do more pictures like this...

>>6063
If I find time to work on more then I shall try.
I had a week off work away from home and had plently of time to draw. This was just a re-draw of a picture I drew 4 years ago... Except this one looks a hell of a lot better as I aimed to correct the errors from before (i.e. her head isn't waaaay to big).
I also did this one as a re-draw of an old image. Original character, not Eclair though ^^;;
It still doesn't look right, but again it's better then the original.

I saw >>5672 mentioned about cell-shading and for the past 3 days i've been working with photoshop to learn that technique and finally..(I guess) this is the result.. Nah,im still new at this and you can see a few mistakes that i barely being lazy to fix it.. >>6593 hey,i'm not good at this.. Screw Yuki? ;_;

>>5944 err.. Do you mean, this? Aww I never draw bondage before :(

>>5946
The biggest flaw in this is the palette and its contrasts. The hair just doesn't HAVE shadows, whereas the skin's shadows are barely visible and the jacket has hard contrast. You should try to balance it a little more. If you find this difficult, you can try making a layer with palette colours, duplicating it and moving it next to the original layer, and adjusting its darkness/lightness and things like that. By this, you should get at least a little more balanced look.

>>5953 so,do you mean the problem is colour eh?(I think the anatomy looks awkward) :) by the way thanks for the critics,I'll make effort on it

>>5954
Well I thought I should mostly critique the colouring since you said you don't know how to use PS.

As for the anatomy, I think the most problems are with the head. Its posture is a little stiff and weird and makes me wonder why it's like that, though, I think it looks pretty cute anyway. I think the top of her head is a little too low and too flat and her chin should be pulled to right a bit when we look at her mouth's position. The upper palm seems a bit too big as well.

They're cute nonetheless, you just need more practice with Photoshop and a few anatomical fixes. Keep up the good work!

>>5949
Actually, I meant tied down to the knees, but the fact that you did it, is great enough. Seriously, my upmost thanks.

You should add Haruhi/Mikuru to the picture while you're at it.

Greetings~ here is another,if possible just leave comments about anatomy and colouring.. Btw can anyone teach me how to create a nice highlighter especially on head? Mine sucks (look at it) ;_;

>>6060
Err, I think the contrast is still off. The shadows of her shirt's black part are clearly visible and hard, whereas the skin's and the shirt's white parts' shadows are well, barely visible. You should make those overly light shadows darker.

>>6061 well,thanks for the critics,maybe all I have to do is adjusting my pc monitor before doing colouring.. oh btw,I don't think I drew skirt so,'she' is actually boy :D

yepp, cant see shit.

huge head.

Head too big.
Shoulder/hip ratio plain wrong.