Suggest you unshit a bit more than just the leg.

It looks like her legs have switched places, broken at joints.
MAN-HIPSSSS!
Everything is out of proportion.
She's falling to the right.

Looks pretty much like a roadkill by a 10-tonne Truck.

Her feet are on backwards. Right knee is broken, doesn't bend like that in that pose. Left leg is attached to her crotch instead of her hip. Shoulders are too wide. Ear is too high and hair shouldn't drape so uniformly around it. Tip of left thumb is cut off. Neck is too wide or too far right. Left and right jacket collars appear to be different fabrics or colors.

such cubism

you should start with basic structure of the body before you draw, it'll make things more easier

>>5034
You mean, like stick figures and then blocking it out?

Yeah, people feel so cool speaking with profanity. I soo love the western way of talking, where one feels so superior just by speaking with profanity. >:(

>>5061
what?

2 point is something like this. points should be far away or object will look distorted or something

3 point, bird's eye view

3 point, frog's eye view (the object is hovering.. orz)

put one of the points even farther away

thanks dudester. I'm still trying to figure out the ins and outs of curvilinear, since there appears to be many ways to approach it. Here's some resources I found:

http://www.handprint.com/HP/WCL/perspect5.html
http://www.scottmcdaniel.net/drawing/perspective/perspective.html
http://www.ntua.gr/arch/geometry/mbk/histor.htm (warning: greek)
http://www.cheeseman-meyer.com/art/tipscurve.htm (I'm not sure what exactly's going on here)
http://sclipo.com/video/advanced-perspective-curvilinear (a video that shows one point of view with the viewpoint at the center)
General figure drawing resource:
http://drawinglab.evansville.edu/

Shading in linear perspective:
http://studiochalkboard.evansville.edu/lp-shadow.html

this needs to be reposted more:
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/index.html

>>5054
Newfag here.

Appreciate that link.

Hay, my redlines are shit.

!!!yeah it's true your redlines are shit!!!

>>5009
!!!!yeah, thanks!!!!

>>5008

it looks like cyborg ninja had a threesome with a ftm and cloud, who then met captain hook.

No. 2

No. 3
currently working on the shines at the hairs...

The lines need to be more steady, darker and more confident. Otherwise the coloring is pretty good for airbrushing.

>>5015
Which one are you talking about? no.1,2, or 3? or every each of them?
And while you're at it, here's no.4..just completed the shines.

>>5017
All of them

The lineart was being confusing, you know. here it is:

As previously stated the lines are ....Fuck

Lol wrong button wtf?
Anyway I was going to be more specific...

The lines... They are.. I've lost my english.
Poor placement, inconsistant width. How did you colour it? Computer? Photoshop?
Try placing the scanned picture in a new channel, create a new layer, load channel as selection in layer, fill in the selection with black. Create another layer below the first one, colour here.

Use more contrast, try with sharp contrast colours and clearly defined fields, first. Soft shading is hard on noobs and you failed it.
And before you start coloring you should work on retouching that linework... Also don't make the sinews in the neck so pronounced, gives that undesirable, anorectic-progeria-look we all do not strive for.

Back down on the highlights in the hair.

Etcetera...

lol urgh

Lines are fine, thought would need some weight.

Lots of anatomy problems.
Way too skinny, I've seen fatter stick figures than this.
Jeesus! Folds don't work like that!
Clothes need more volume, smoother.
Body armor needs to be thicker, volume.
Helmet bigger.
Needs trigger discipline.

Sad how it really looks like you've gone thru lot of work making this.

>>4995
OP here. This any better?
Mind you, I'm not trying to make a Da Vinci.

>>5000
Better, but not perfect.

Not trying to make a Da Vinci? So you're not trying to be good?
I just pointed out critical facts, that if fixed it would make the picture little better.

But if you want to be an ignorant fool, go ahead.

>>5001
I'm not trying not to be good, I'm trying not to let the perfect become the enemy of the good. This is the first time I've ever used a tablet.

Perfection is never the enemy of good. What the hell are you talking about?

It doesn't really matter whether or not it's the first time, unless the tablet makes your hand magically draw worse than normally. Even if it did, nobody cares, because this is the result you posted.

If you post here, prepare to get criticized. If you don't want criticism past a certain degree, don't post here. Problem solved.

>>5006
What I'm saying is that an artist attempting a masterpiece the first time he takes pen to paper is going to burn himself out from the effort and give up art, because he tried to do something his skills couldn't afford. That's the idea behind getting better at something incrementally as your skill increases from working at it: before you can be perfect, you have to be good.

Here, I worked on the folds a little bit, drew in the missing components, and added some color.

>>5027
Freeman called, he wanted his crowbar back.

And please, RESIZE! DO YOU KNOW IT!?

i think i can snap him with just my thumb,
he too skinny and should add more attitude in his walking, it too stiff. and the ankle was way out through the window. and holding gun like that just way wrong

and what the heck is he doing with the crowbar?

>>5027

On the other hand, that's no excuse to not try or to refuse advice, simply because that's ridiculous.

There's a difference between perfectionism and taking advice given WHEN YOU ASK FOR IT.

I like this, though I'm not exactly sure how >>4923's shoes work.

Aim the eyes down. She ain't lookin' down.

The background doesnt really bring out the character....That aside, its a pretty decent drawing i think. Like the scythe most

Looks Rly Good men!

But iam rigth with this person who tell about the background ,wherever is a good work n_n sigue asi

You drew this by hand? rly nice . Is it original character?

The left arm's too long.
The right one's just WRONG.
And the fingers are no proper fingers.
the neck's too small, and the head's too big.
etc
I put the left hand on her hip 'cause even after 5+ tries I couldn't get the hand I wanted.
Anyways, hope I could help a little bit.

GAY

gay

you're gay.. the picture is good, and the anatomy seems pretty nice

do like

As matter of fact... it isn't.

>>4973

Can someone tell me -what- is wrong with it rather than just saying it's bad, please?

The perspective is all wonky. Their legs are too thin.

All three books and the bodies appear to be sitting on entirely different planes.