Sakura pic i did
Never draw hentai again. Ever.
Oh man... This is Pain.
This is the meaning of FAIL
Hm whats so bad about it?I think you've done quite well.. however i dont have much experience when it comes to art, so could anyone tell me/us exactly whats so bad about it? :)
umm maybe it's the juice dripping down the incredibly articulated vagina and asshole of a 12 year old?
>>4968Yeah I think thats it
>>4968Don't forget the horrid cross eyes that denote a need for aiiiiiiiiir
>>4968 The guys at 4chan will love it.
>>4968
The guys at 4chan will love it.
apart from the juices which are in a ps layer and can easily be removed ... what else is wrong with it?
meh, drew this sometime back, why? I really dunno. believe me, you don't wanna see the other stuff I draw...srsly... comments, critique or rotten fruit?
meh, drew this sometime back, why? I really dunno. believe me, you don't wanna see the other stuff I draw...srsly...
comments, critique or rotten fruit?
MSPaint, not the best software.Lacks some shading.Your other stuff? I'f it's worse than this... oh dear...
MSPaint, not the best software.
Lacks some shading.
Your other stuff? I'f it's worse than this... oh dear...
lolz, trouble is I was using the GIMP when drawing this....yes most are worse than this...
lolz, trouble is I was using the GIMP when drawing this.
...yes most are worse than this...
something different
use the reply button, please.
another.......
meh, i dig the stuff i draw......keeps me from going on a spree killing...
Drawing. With my very first tablet. It's just the sketch line work. I have yet to go through and clean it up. So far it was merely done on MSPaint alone because I don't have a better drawing program yet.
Cool. You should download Pixia for a slightly better program. It has layers!
Still new at this whole colouring dark-skinned people. points to girl
You did a pretty fine job, overall the picture is good, like your coloring and the linework is fiine. So is the girls hairdressing shit, like the details.What I don't like is the flatness of the scene, the hair of the guy, and also the cloth looks poorly rendered.More interesting angles please, this feels kind of 'egyptian wallpaintings advanced'.I also like your hands, but the faces are anumu-lol and don't go well with the detailed anatomy of the rest of the bodies.
You did a pretty fine job, overall the picture is good, like your coloring and the linework is fiine. So is the girls hairdressing shit, like the details.
What I don't like is the flatness of the scene, the hair of the guy, and also the cloth looks poorly rendered.
More interesting angles please, this feels kind of 'egyptian wallpaintings advanced'.
I also like your hands, but the faces are anumu-lol and don't go well with the detailed anatomy of the rest of the bodies.
Well, it's not as detailed as I usually do... but I wanted something simple and pretty for once... something anime-esque been reading Manga
MOAR
hmm...
Meh, morning doodle of Habanero-tan. I should probably fix that horrible shadow on her nose, but this Anonymous is being lazy.
hmm. i'm not really in a place to critique, but since no one else is... i think the shape of the hair should be a little different, less flippy on the bottom maybe. the bottom tips of habanero's hair kind of point straight, not curved.also, theres something about the winking eye... it might be a little high, that could be it. then just the curve of the jaw could be a little softer, but thats kind of trivial.BUT on a positive note, overall (without looking at minute details) she's really cute! the body/dress looks just like her and i love the shine on the hair.. however you do that... (photoshop illiterate)
hmm. i'm not really in a place to critique, but since no one else is...
i think the shape of the hair should be a little different, less flippy on the bottom maybe. the bottom tips of habanero's hair kind of point straight, not curved.
also, theres something about the winking eye... it might be a little high, that could be it. then just the curve of the jaw could be a little softer, but thats kind of trivial.
BUT on a positive note, overall (without looking at minute details) she's really cute! the body/dress looks just like her and i love the shine on the hair.. however you do that... (photoshop illiterate)
Thank you for the pointers. I didn't really put a lot of time into this, so there are probably tons of stuff wrong with it...And like I said - I don't even plan on fixing it.The shine was pretty simple. I picked up the hair color, turned it a bit more orange, then set the brush to around 40% and to Screen, and just drew the shine over the hair...I think.
Thank you for the pointers. I didn't really put a lot of time into this, so there are probably tons of stuff wrong with it...And like I said - I don't even plan on fixing it.
The shine was pretty simple. I picked up the hair color, turned it a bit more orange, then set the brush to around 40% and to Screen, and just drew the shine over the hair...I think.
at the basic stage. drawn, scanned, and paint bucketed... critique/redlines would be much appreciated. also i'm kind of stuck in this stage, any ideas on where to go from here?
ps i know the proportions are fail so less pointless flame and more help is preffered.. >.<;;
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