I'm not an artist, so maybe I can't tell you what's rrong with it, but it looks awesome from what I see of it.

>>5919
yeah. lots of them

1.)forward canards are small and align in the wrong angle
2.the cockpit's nose is too short and not rounded like the nose of the Su-34
3.)tail rudders are too close and too long
4.)air intakes are not aligned well against the afterburners
5.)right wing is too long compared to the left
6.)afterburners are very small
7.)the falken looks like it has a long tail from this viewpoint perspective, which in reality has just a pair of air breaks, the aircrafts engine is supposed to be longer than the tail

overall, the poor perspective of the drawing ruins the anatomy of the airplane, try practicing perspective and volume, study the object your about to draw from all angles

Thanks for pointing these problems out, when I first started this drawing I did not have good views of the plane to work with, just the ac5 wallpaper, and my ps2 is at home so i couldnt rotate the plane in game. As I said, some things I automatically found wrong, but I appreciate you finding more than what I thought. Points 2,3, and 7.

>>5923
yes, you can rotate the FALKEN in the game, there is an option in the hangar menu that allows you to view it 360 degrees around, or if your still having a hard time drawing it, find a scaled down model of it in a toy store or buy it, and sketch all sides of it, top, left side, right side, rear , and front, and then play around with the sketches for a perspective you want

we have seen it on DA...

the finished version o.o

>>5899
Problems: Eyes, Right hand, hips, legs, left knee.
Merits: Good lines, vibrant colors, good overall thumbnail feel.

>>5900
Problems: Right shoulder, awkward left hand.

Merits: Good coloring.

Sche, keep doing your thing. Love the colors, but the anatomical struggles you'll have to overcome yourself.

Thanks for pointing those out xD
Now that you mention it, those parts do look off -.-

I'm looking for a good tutorial on anatomy right now, actually. xD

>>5900
Fire in the hole!
Seriously you gotta do something about your anatomical quirks. You got nice stuff, but it's kind of dragged into the mud by some issues. It could be much better

And stop it with the limb/hand-hiding for pete's sake!
You think of a scene, exactly what you want. Then you don't reduce it to some compromise with your weaknesses; you wrestle it until you win and you become stronger.

>>5910
The new sultry summer at the bottom right corner is relevant to my interests

>>5911
lol, I know rite?

>>5761

here some points you should remember:
1.study anatomy, perspective, depth, and almost anything that has to do with modern art
2.relax your arms and hands, its the one thing that's gonna give you a hard time to draw, learn to control you grip on the pencil, pen, WACOM pen, or whatever tools of art your using
3.get some critics from other artist you know or meet, they can help you learn even more better for they will teach you some pros and cons on artworks
4.bad critics, you can't get rid of them, just don't let get to you, just do a s you like
5.PRACTICE, never forget that word, talent alone would not do, to get the skills you want, you need to train and work hard for it

Thanks so much for the tips and critique.

Can you guys help me w/ this drawing next?

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>>5761
This is a nice picture. Her open eye should be a little more closed than that, so she looks like she's smiling more.

>>5564

Thanks for dissenting without saging again.

>>5546
Amen to that bro!!!

>>5546
I think the artist is making a statement of his/hers fascination with prepubescent penors

NOW SAGE THIS

Another sage for good measure

SAGE IN ALL FIELDS!

lol look at all the baw fags in this thread crying tcause they afraid of white men

>>5897
wtf r u talking about

why are we still bumping this

>>5897
What the hell are you on about? We're saging because its some poorly drawn yaoi that's been up for MONTHS.

I'm not even going to pretend I enjoy the subject choice. Over and out.

Good art but just not acceptable for me or normal society.....lol

If the dedication to my feedback in any way should reflect your efforts, all I can say is this:

Keep trying

This is cute enough, and a good start if you want to draw anime. However, try looking at the muscles in the legs. They have more shape than how you drew them. Also, boobies do not come straigt out of your armpits. Both of these are problems I've had before, which is why I was able to notice them.
Anyway, KEEP AT IT! Listen to crit, and study anatomy some, then apply it to your art. I can practically guarentee you'll get better.

Get the curves back in here goddamn!

If by help, you mean help take those off, then I'm here.

You taking requests?

thanks >>5889 !
that helped a lot already
tried to give her some more curves but im afraid they didnt turn out as good as the ones you gave her...
im not sure the hands any better now, took me like 4 tries to get it like that lol
anyone know some nice sites with human refs?

>>5891 only those that are paid ;)

(oh yea horrible animu face is here to stay)

>>5707
>>5710

>Harada related.

It's Takehito Harada. I'd shoot myself in the cock if I could draw that well.

yeah i drew both of them on a sketch pad then drawing slate then coloured it in on photoshop and illustrator

there's nothing wrong with the having a sketchy style and flat colouring system, but it looks more like concept/reference sketch than finished art

both of these arts are by no one in this thread </thread>

that tau bitch drawing was the sketch for a mod. you sir fail at life

let's see if this bitch deletes the entire post out of cretinous shame

wanna see my original sketches???
its shadow sun i got the ifeas from the model. I thought u all would know that lol

If you could spare the time: Could you do the picture asked for in this topic? http://iiichan.net/boards/oekaki/res/896.html

that sketch was on 4chan's /tg/ half a year ago you fucking liar

NO U lol
as i said do u want do see my original drawings???

>>5846
i dont mean to sound like i need to justify my stuff or anyting like that...
quite frankly, anything you say here is much more appreciated than just about anywhere else i hear it...
those morons at school dont know a damn thing
its even worse if youre a writer, because all they ever say is, 'thats great!' but no real advice...i dont mean to sound like i dont appreciate it...
ill do some sketches if i have some time and put them up...but im pressed for time at the moment

in a week or so ill have a water colour to put up...it would be the most free hand kind of thing ive done...its quite large and needs graded though.

>>5849
It's nice to hear you appriciate honest feedback, really gives me hope for you as an artist.
And it's quite ironic, yeah; the teachers at your school care more about being nice than teaching you shit. They're too afraid of disapproval to be useful, whereas we, who don't give a shit can tell you what you need to hear, making us your new best friends.

But again, don't make an effort to bring us finished work in particular, better you squeeze in time for sketching because a sketch is the foundation upon which you build the entire picture; If the sketch is shit, everything is shit.
As I said, sketches gives us more to work with; it tells a more honest story about what you need to improve, and what you need to change.
I don't feel I had so much to say about the original picture ITT, it's like finished and shit. But the one in >>5840 had more to offer.

>>5852
yah, i did spend a whole quarter on this painting...
i did it for an art contest, and i dont mean to put mine on a pedestal or anything, but she didnt even nominate mine...and then when i went to the art gallery that had the contest...they had some real shit
it pissed me off because she only plays favours
i learn more from here to be sure
anywway, ill work on sketching up some faces today

>>5853
Excellent
btw you wouldn't happen to have a deviant or some shit?

>>5854 ok, i did some sketches, im not too happy with any of them...
one thing...you might notice, is that on the full body one, half her necklace is missing
i just barely realized that i did that, because i was erasing her hair and going to do somehting else...
i think i got distracted with that cat

i do have a deviant art... http://sirmakura.deviantart.com/
nothing really good on there in my opinion

ok, i did another one, i spent more time making the eyes not be so crooked though
this one i didnt look at any reference, feet, clothes or anything, i tried to work only from logic and memory

>>5856
I like this one.
A few things:
-Your style is kind of enlongated, try to make your characters a bit more compact, both face and body and see how you like it.
-Your faces are a bit flat, which comes to life especially when you draw them at an angle. You need to adjust the features properly to match.
-You still clean your sketches too much, I wanna see some structure lines, less polish. The idea here isn't to give each little piece its own finish, you wanna make a lot of shit in a condensed period of time and see how you progress and adjust.
-Mix styles on the same sheet, so you can compare, draw conclusions, try new things and adjust things, cross-referentially. That's probably not even a word, but perhaps you get what I mean.
-Try breaking your style apart and build it up from scratch, even if it's just on one paper, for the sake of experimenting. Let us see what happens. In any case you don't need to stick with what you do, but you'll always learn from it.

>>5858
thanks
ill try that
i do know i elongate everything
its a bad habit, hard to break, but im going to try to
thanks :D
ill do it in a more sketchy thing too

>>5861
In case you wanna keep in touch on deviantArt:
http://revoltingfriendship.deviantart.com/

>>I've gotten so good at drawing anime!

compared to what?
imo it's not good enough to be worth "photoshopping". I'm sort of hoping you're trolling here, alt. that you're very young. Too young to even be on IIchan

What do you mean not worth PSin'?! You stupid fag! my art is great!11!!

>>5847
lawl ^^

This is the section where you can post a picture and request. Choose "request bbs" on the left. Everything is in Japanese, but I was able to get a quest up since it uses the same template as this.

>>5836

Doh! Here is the link http://okazugetterbbs.jpn.org/

>>5835

Now, in the comment field, place you request like this.

[Source]
Name of picture

[Request]
What you want done with the pic

Now, remember, there is no promise that it will be done. This is all done for free,(afaik) and eerything is in Japanese, so you might get passed over by non-english readers.

I'd like a similar board where nude pictures are touched up with clothes instead. I'd hang around such a place for sure.

>>5751
First of all its "ninja" even in the plural. And yes, they DID exist (they don't any more), though not in the "lolmagix" way just about every cartoon shows 'em as.
Second, anything flashy would be a bad idea. You're running and dodging and hiding--why the hell would you (a) want loose hair to begin with or (b) want to wear something flashy that can be seen in the shadows? Or something that (c) could potentially define who you are or where you are from?

I don't mind Naruto character designs--safely stuck in Naruto. Those design conventions work perfectly well given the story and author's interpretation. Unfortunately, your designs don't look like there is any reason your characters should look the way they do--they are all just either FF or Naruto rips, and that is a bad thing.

I'm all for learning by doing fanart or taking some conventions. But you can't excuse the fact that your designs right now are a wee bit stolen.

>>5787
First of all I'm not OP

It isn't ninja either, it's shinobi no mono, ninja is a edo period conception applied specifically for the idea of "shinobi" ever being organized groups specializing specifically in clandestine arts.

The reason all ninja-legends come from Kaga and Iga is because during the sengoku jidai these areas were out of official shogunal control for extended periods. They became safe havens for all sorts of outlaws and people trying to get away from organized society. Such groups have always been contracted for illegal activities but there were none or very few organizations specializing in the area.

And if there were, they were nothing but minor clans of regular conformity or bands of outlaws, accepting work as outside agents. They didn't refer to themselves as ninja, nor shinobi no mono for that matter. It would be those who suffered their activities who would call them that, because shinobi no mono simply refers to anyone who does anything "stealthy". So anyone who did anything in that direction would be a "shinobi", even if it was a courtesan relaying the bedchamber whispers of her lover to his enemies.

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sage goes in every field

its not a ninja!!

>>5804
Randomly, are you taking requests?

what kind of request?

What are the chances of asking for you to draw these characters from ZnT? What I'm asking for is
Louise: (http://img182.imageshack.us/img182/4108/1200034506661xq0.jpg) and Siesta: http://img160.imageshack.us/img160/7640/cc5e66c6dbfe55c1cbb0e42dh5.jpg tied up like this man, although arms should be behind back http://img402.imageshack.us/img402/2118/1141784674759rx1xm0.jpg & Kirche: (http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd200/Laharl2007/kirche-1.jpg) and
Henrietta: (http://img209.imageshack.us/img209/1732/1660ea24f250981ea21d6e6cd3.jpg) tied up like the woman in the bottom left of this picture only up to their knees though http://img179.imageshack.us/img179/6227/virgincovervv9.jpg Everyone should be sitting/laying down on the floor and gagged with black tape. (and if need for a background, use a small room or something)

How's that?

I don't know why, but this is supposed to be the picture that I posted, and I can't seem to delete the other one.

Hm.... i'm not gonna promise you anything but i'll see what i can do...

>>5833
My thanks