And the WIP coloured version. I'm still adding the shading, but thoughts and suggestions on this is also welcome.

I'll be away for a week with little internet access, so I won't be able to work on any suggestions right away I'm afraid, though I will act on them when I'm back.

Thanks for your time

first, you fail for drawing porn, and second, it's horrible.
Sugestion: become an hero.

I kinda prefer the lineart layer version. Something about the colored version makes it lose its appeal...

Well First off its to thin. I strecher the image a little in photoshop to widen the face and body.

Her left leg is way to thin and needs to be beffed up a bit. Her shoulders are a little wonky as well.

Image is a little rough as I don't have my wacom tablet hooked up yet ( new install)

and I forgot the image.

Well I'm back from my trip and will be working on this tomorrow as it's a tad too late now.
>>5141
Many thanks for your suggestions, I'll take a look into them when I start working on it.
>>5130
I'll keep that in mind and release a lineart only version as well. Thanks.
>>5120
Yes it's pron, if you don't like it I'm sorry. And if it's horrible, care to tell me why so i can then try to make pictures that aren't "horrible"?
Your suggestion is noted and as soon as my undercrackers come out the wash I shall don them on my head and save the world from peril ;)

nice!

>>5106

try more realistic coloring, thats extreeemely basic cel shading