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180096 No.5468  

Hey guys, I've tried color this into the one below.

What should I corrected?

(by the way this is my first time doing the coloring. Please give me some constructive guide.)

>> No.5469  
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>> No.5664  

lol, what is that black thingy in the left? PC?

seriously now...

>> No.5672  

Airbrushing and Anime don't mix well. Also if you are gonna airbrush use another layer in Photoshop or select "darken" under brush options. Doing this will allow your pencil lines to stand out more and not look like an off grey. And also, you should adjust the brightness and contrast in a pic every time after you scan it to get the best out of your lines.

You original line work was pretty good. You have some issues with the perspective on little things like the chair and the monitor. If your gonna stay with Anime start Inking your pictures.

also here is a quick beginner guide to cel-shading i just grabbed from google

http://www.blackrevolver.com/tutorial.html

There's a lot more and better guides but this is simple and straight to the point. Also if you don't have it yet, get photoshop, almost impossible to survive as a digital artist without it.

>> No.5679  

OP here, Thanks. The tutorial really helps.

And you are one of the few constructive criticism around here. I thought I'll got flame to death like >>5664 try to say.

>> No.5690  
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I tried the tutorial from the previous post, and here's what I got.

This is the original image. I draw this for purely coloring purpose.

>> No.5692  
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...And this is what I got.

How was it?

>> No.5705  

>>5692
Fairly similar. The skin tone is really red and really pale, the coloring has "holes" in it that produce white pixels where there shouldn't be, and there's not much contrast in the coloring. Shadow placement is also inconsistent.

Start by making sure that there's no blank spots in your coloring when you hide your lines. Also, make your lines cleaner

>> No.5709  

Thanks. I will try to make my line more clean next time.

>>and there's not much contrast in the coloring. Shadow placement is also inconsistent.

Can you point that out to me? I'm kinda stupid when it comes to this kind of things.

>> No.5747  

Honestly in terms of shadow depth you may just want to examine your monitor. You could have it on a dark setting or in a bad place.

As for shading..... just observe stuff lying around. Where the light is, stuff is light. Where the light isn't, stuff is shadowy. Is simple, no?

Good luck, you have nice drawings.

>> No.5938  
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a quick piece using OpenCanvas.



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