I feel as if I have committed a grave misstep. Perhaps one more skilled than I may illustrate to me what manner of erroneous ground upon which I have trodden.
the hands are large and a little claw like. the arms and legs are very thick compared to the torso. right after the inner-tube the top of the torso and head are too small even at the angle.all in all they are a pretty easy fix, just try adjusting your proportions, i know its hard when working with odd perspective like this. The coloring and background and amazing and almost makes you forget about those errors. You have a lot of talent just take some more time to polish up proportions and you could easily pawn that off as pro work
the hands are large and a little claw like. the arms and legs are very thick compared to the torso. right after the inner-tube the top of the torso and head are too small even at the angle.
all in all they are a pretty easy fix, just try adjusting your proportions, i know its hard when working with odd perspective like this. The coloring and background and amazing and almost makes you forget about those errors. You have a lot of talent just take some more time to polish up proportions and you could easily pawn that off as pro work
>>5678You have my thanks. I shall bear your critique, and march forward. Such distorted perspective is foreign land to me.
It looks pretty good to me from a far...but if one takes a closer look...I might see what >>5678 was trying to say...Nice attempt out of your comfort zone...
i think you have done a great job in colouring..
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