mmm...

now thats better, no annoying stuffs blocking that nice picture

Good overall.

But once again, your legs are 2D and therefore fail.

Thanks for listening, this is much better indeed

And about the new picture
>>5764
Yes the legs. You need to have them at the same angle as the torso/pelvic region, or it looks awkward.

And do not blatantly hide hands like that. Overall the pose in this picture is more quirky than in any of the previous.

On the upside, once again, nice color pickings. Nice smooth shading/coloring

Thanks so much for the critique and tip. C:
And as you can obviously see, I have an extremely hard time drawing hips (and lower).
I'll really try to work on that in future drawings. >.<

Work hard on those hips and making your characters more 3D, otherwise, you have nice drawings.

I think that besides legs, you should practice folding and make the cloth look more like fabric. At the moment, it kinda looks like plastic wrapped around tha chara's body at some places. You did it right in the right half of the yellow one's hem, but otherwise it's kind of flat-looking. Especially the purple one's clothes are actually gravity-defying.

So far here's the lineart for "Summer '08"
Are the hips out of proportion in this drawing?
And can anyone suggest what i can do with her arms?

>>Are the hips out of proportion in this drawing?

I'll get back to you on that.

>>And can anyone suggest what i can do with her arms?

Don't hide them

I think it's a good time to challenge your weakness. Show us some different hand angles.

So far this is what I have.
She's holding sarong. C:
It's not done yet. I still have to add the shading and fix up the background. I'm still not sure with the color choice yet either. Any suggestions?

you hid your hands :( Don't hide them.

heres a new one o.o

the finished version o.o

>>5899
Problems: Eyes, Right hand, hips, legs, left knee.
Merits: Good lines, vibrant colors, good overall thumbnail feel.

>>5900
Problems: Right shoulder, awkward left hand.

Merits: Good coloring.

Sche, keep doing your thing. Love the colors, but the anatomical struggles you'll have to overcome yourself.

Thanks for pointing those out xD
Now that you mention it, those parts do look off -.-

I'm looking for a good tutorial on anatomy right now, actually. xD

>>5900
Fire in the hole!
Seriously you gotta do something about your anatomical quirks. You got nice stuff, but it's kind of dragged into the mud by some issues. It could be much better

And stop it with the limb/hand-hiding for pete's sake!
You think of a scene, exactly what you want. Then you don't reduce it to some compromise with your weaknesses; you wrestle it until you win and you become stronger.

>>5910
The new sultry summer at the bottom right corner is relevant to my interests

>>5911
lol, I know rite?

>>5761

here some points you should remember:
1.study anatomy, perspective, depth, and almost anything that has to do with modern art
2.relax your arms and hands, its the one thing that's gonna give you a hard time to draw, learn to control you grip on the pencil, pen, WACOM pen, or whatever tools of art your using
3.get some critics from other artist you know or meet, they can help you learn even more better for they will teach you some pros and cons on artworks
4.bad critics, you can't get rid of them, just don't let get to you, just do a s you like
5.PRACTICE, never forget that word, talent alone would not do, to get the skills you want, you need to train and work hard for it

Thanks so much for the tips and critique.

Can you guys help me w/ this drawing next?

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>>5761
This is a nice picture. Her open eye should be a little more closed than that, so she looks like she's smiling more.