>>5976
too big for my monitor, can't see it in much detail

Proportions are okay I guess, but there are anatomy problems. Perspective wise, this is a mess. You're characters lack all since of foreshortening, and ergo look like 2D puppets. Also, adding at least a simple floor would help the perspective, because right now it looks like they're floating in space.

>>5981
This. It looks totally flat.

>>5981

>Perspective wise, this is a mess. You're characters lack all since of foreshortening, and ergo look like 2D puppets.

All right, I'd like to know more about this. How does one do away with the rag-puppet thing? Assuming okay, proportions are okay, but the anatomy? Where is it glaring? Anatomies aren't my very strong points, but I'd like to fix it at least in this picture.

>Also, adding at least a simple floor would help the perspective, because right now it looks like they're floating in space.

Background picture comes later. Right now, I'd like to address the issues in the inked picture first.

Also, Admin, cleanup in this aisle please, CP links, detected.

>>5976
you've still got a lot to learn friend, this is not enough, you have to exceed beyond this sample of yours, the truth is you can do much better than that drawing of yours, just spend more time to practice and study this style of art and don't give up, its not really that difficult to learn japanese style of art, just give it your best and one day, you'll get what you just deserve

>>5988